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Thoughts Through The Clouds Of My Mind!!!!
« on: December 09, 2008, 05:13:19 pm »
I enjoy writing, as a matter of fact it gives me peace, so I hope by sharing with all of you that you get some peace also thanks for reading and may the season be all that it can be for one and all, may not one of you or yours go without love, a full belly and a warm bed....


Through cloudy eyes
My mind plays games of seek and hide....
I see her sitting there
On the porch in her rocking chair!!!

She sips her coffee, trying to make it last
As her mind flows to seasons of the past...
Summers, and the hot heat
Snow shoveling to an inner beat!!!

Not so long ago
She ran and played in fields of snow
A cardboard box made for a sled
And ah peacefull slumber in a fluffy bed!!!

She dreams of cotton candy
And a bright sunny day, playing on the beach and getting sandy...
The hot toddies on a sick day made of brandy
And them hunks who came in handy!!!

Of babies born
And fields of corn
Of lovers past
And legs in a cast!!!

Of her miracle child
Who ran so free and wild
Of friends who called
And boarding up walls.....

Yes, the rocker slows
And the trees with frozen snow glows...
One more Christmas
And hopes for peace at last.....

In the cobwebs of my mind
We all have a warm place to find
And everyone is so very kind
And not one person goes hungry or cold and wishes well for all mankind!!!!

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Re: Thoughts Through The Clouds Of My Mind!!!!
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2008, 05:40:28 pm »
That was very good

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Re: Thoughts Through The Clouds Of My Mind!!!!
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2008, 10:36:58 pm »
ahh i read it again its peaceful  8)

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Re: Thoughts Through The Clouds Of My Mind!!!!
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2008, 11:02:29 pm »
Thank you very much, I love writing, and have finally listened to people and have started to post my poems on my forums and to share....

I didn't know if they would be able to be posted here, but especially at this time of year, I like to think I could bring joy to those who need it, get people to realize, even if you don't have much, if you have love, you are very rich.... very rich indeed!!!!

Share a smile, for it just might lighten someone else's day!!!!

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Re: Thoughts Through The Clouds Of My Mind!!!!
« Reply #4 on: December 11, 2008, 06:53:42 am »
your welcome! its very good  :)

 

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